Shadows Over Deodhargaon

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Summary

On vacation to escape city life, Durjay and Aparna arrive in Deodhargaon seeking renewal. Their retreat turns ominous when they discover a local's murder. Over time, they unravel a secretive cult, buried village secrets, and face their inner demons-culminating in the killer's reveal and a hint at darker forces still at work.

Genre
Mystery
Author
B. Aditya
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Arrival at Dusk: Part 1

The jeep rattled along the narrow, winding road, its tires crunching over loose gravel as it ascended into the Himalayan foothills. Durjay pressed his forehead against the cool window, gazing out at the deodar trees that stood tall and still, their needle-like leaves shimmering faintly in the late afternoon light. A soft mist drifted through the forest, wrapping the landscape in a gentle haze. The air filtering through the cracked window was crisp, tinged with the earthy scent of pine and the distant promise of rain. Somewhere beyond the treeline, a bird called—a sharp, fleeting sound swallowed by the vastness of the mountains.

“God, I needed this,” Aparna said, breaking the silence as she shifted her camera bag onto her lap. “No honking cars, no emails pinging every five seconds—just this.” She gestured toward the window with a grin. “Look at that view. It’s like the world decided to take a deep breath.”

Durjay turned to her, a faint smile tugging at his lips. “Yeah, it’s gorgeous. But doesn’t it feel… I don’t know, too quiet? Like everything’s waiting for something.”

Aparna rolled her eyes playfully. “Oh, come on, Durjay. You’ve been reading too many crime novels. We’re here to unwind, not to sniff out conspiracies in the trees.”

He chuckled, rubbing the back of his neck. “Fair point. Still, you’ve got to admit it’s eerie how peaceful it is. No traffic, no people—just us and the forest.”

“Exactly,” she said, leaning back in her seat. “That’s the magic of it. I can already feel the stress melting away.”

The jeep slowed as it rounded a bend, and Tenzin’s Hearth emerged from the mist—a sturdy guesthouse of dark wood and weathered stone, tucked snugly among the towering deodars. Lanterns hung along the porch, their golden glow swaying gently in the breeze, casting pools of light against the encroaching dusk.


Sherpa Tenzin stood at the entrance, his broad shoulders framed by the doorway. His face, lined with years of mountain life, broke into a warm smile as he waved them inside. “Welcome, Mr. and Mrs. Rakshit! You’ve timed it perfectly—tea’s just ready.” He handed them clay cups filled with steaming chai, the sweet aroma of cardamom and ginger wafting up to greet them.

Aparna wrapped her hands around her cup and took a sip, closing her eyes in contentment. “Oh, this is heavenly. You’ve no idea how much I’ve been craving something like this.”

“Glad you like it,” Tenzin said, his voice deep and steady. “We make it with spices from the village. Keeps the chill away.”

Durjay nodded, glancing around the lobby as he sipped his tea. The room was simple yet cozy, with wooden walls etched with faint carvings of leaves and vines. A small fire crackled in the corner, sending tendrils of pine-scented smoke curling upward. “This place is incredible,” he said. “How long have you been running it?”

“Long enough,” Tenzin replied with a chuckle. “My father built it, and I took over when he couldn’t climb the trails anymore. Deodhargaon’s home—it’s quiet, but it’s got its own spirit.” His smile faded slightly as he glanced toward the window. “Just… be mindful out there. The forest is beautiful, but it’s not always kind.”

Aparna tilted her head, curious. “Not kind? What do you mean?”

Tenzin hesitated, then shrugged. “Oh, you know—old trails, tricky paths. Stick close to the guesthouse, and you’ll be fine. Anyway, rest up. Dinner’s at seven, and Nima the temple caretaker is going to tell stories by the fire tonight. You won’t want to miss it.”

“Stories?” Durjay asked, his interest piqued. “What kind?”

“The kind that make you listen,” Tenzin said cryptically, turning toward the kitchen before Durjay could press further.

Outside, the mist thickened, draping the deodar trees in a silvery veil. The faint chirping of crickets rose and fell, a soft chorus that seemed to hum through the stillness.


Their room was a snug retreat, with low wooden beams crisscrossing the ceiling and a single window offering a glimpse of the misty forest beyond. Aparna set her camera on the table, her fingers itching to explore. “I’m dying to get out there with this,” she said, tapping the lens. “The light’s so soft—it’s like the mountains are posing for me.”

Durjay flopped onto the bed, stretching out with a groan. “Go for it. Just don’t expect me to keep up—I’m still recovering from that drive.” He stared at the ceiling, trying to shake the odd feeling that had settled in his chest. The silence here was different from the city’s chaos—deeper, heavier, almost alive.

A knock at the door jolted him upright. He opened it to find Kamala, a young woman with a ledger tucked under her arm and a bright, easy smile. “Hi there! I’m Kamala—I help Tenzin keep this place running. Everything okay with the room?”

“It’s perfect,” Aparna said, stepping forward. “I love the view.”

Kamala’s eyes shone with genuine warmth. After a brief pause, she added, “By the way, ma’am, I’ve been following your blog for some time—Your photos from Sikkim were stunning—I showed them to my cousins, and they couldn’t believe how you captured the monasteries. Are you planning to shoot around here too?”

“Definitely,” Aparna said, beaming. “This place is begging to be photographed. Any spots you’d recommend?”

Kamala’s smile faltered for a moment. “The riverbank’s lovely—especially at sunrise. Just… don’t go too deep into the woods, okay? The paths can twist on you, and it’s easy to lose your way.”

Durjay leaned against the doorframe, crossing his arms. “Lose your way how? Tenzin said something similar.”

Kamala shifted her weight, her gaze flicking to the window. “Oh, it’s nothing serious—just old trails that wind around. People say funny things about the forest sometimes, that’s all.” She laughed, but it sounded forced. “Anyway, I’ll let you settle in. See you at dinner!”

After she left, Aparna turned to Durjay, her brow furrowed. “Okay, that was weird. Why’s everyone so cagey about the woods?”

He shrugged, peering out at the lantern-lit paths snaking through the hamlet. “Beats me. But it’s starting to feel like they’re all in on some secret they don’t want us to know.”

Beyond the glass, the deodars stood like sentinels, their branches swaying faintly in the breeze. The mist clung to their trunks, softening the edges of the world into a dreamlike blur.


The dining hall buzzed with quiet chatter as guests filled their plates with steaming momos and thick barley stew. The air was rich with the scent of spices and firewood, and the lanterns overhead bathed the room in a warm, amber glow. Tenzin stood near the doorway with Nima Lama, a calm figure in saffron robes whose presence seemed to hush the crowd. A young man in a ranger’s uniform sat at a nearby table, eating quietly but glancing around.

“Evening, everyone,” Tenzin called out. “Dinner’s on, and at eight, Nima’s got some tales for us outside by the fire. Bring a jacket—it’s getting chilly.”

Durjay spooned stew into his bowl, leaning close to Aparna. “Notice how they keep hinting at things? It’s like they’re testing us.”

She nodded, her eyes darting around the room. “Yeah. And they’re all so careful about it—like they’re scared the walls might overhear.”

The ranger at their table set his spoon down, offering a small grin. “Couldn’t help overhearing—I’m Ravi, the local forest ranger. I help Tenzin with odd jobs around here, so I grab dinner at the guesthouse most nights. You’re right, though. Deodhargaon’s got a strange vibe.”

Durjay raised an eyebrow, shaking Ravi’s hand. “I’m Durjay, this is Aparna. Strange vibe how?”

Ravi leaned in, his voice low. “The woods—they’ve got stories. Things people don’t talk about straight. Ask Nima tonight. He’s been here forever, knows the forest like his own shadow.” He stood, grabbing his cap. “Enjoy the food—best momos you’ll ever have.”

Durjay watched him go, his mind buzzing. “Okay, now I’m hooked. This place is hiding something big.”

Aparna smirked, dipping a momo into chutney. “You’re hopeless. But yeah—I’m starting to wonder too.”

Outside, the night deepened, the air thick with the scent of pine and the distant murmur of a stream winding through the valley.


After dinner, the guests gathered around a fire-pit in the courtyard, the flames crackling and spitting sparks into the starry sky. The deodar trees loomed overhead, their branches swaying in a gentle wind that carried the faint, sweet smell of sap. The mist had settled low, weaving through the forest like threads of silk, softening the edges of the hamlet into a quiet, timeless stillness.

Nima Lama sat cross-legged by the fire, his voice a steady hum against the night. “Long ago, there was a trader named Raghav,” he began. “He came through these hills with a cart full of goods—silks, spices, little trinkets from the plains. One evening, he stopped at the old shrine in the woods. Next morning, his cart was there, but he was gone. No tracks, no signs—just silence.”

A log popped in the fire, and Durjay felt Aparna’s hand tighten in his. “What happened to him?” he asked.

Nima’s eyes glinted in the firelight. “Some say the forest took him. Others hear his footsteps still, pacing the trails at night. The silence here—it’s not empty. It watches. It waits.”

A sudden gust swept through the clearing, dimming the flames and rustling the leaves overhead. The shadows danced, stretching long and thin across the ground, and for a moment, Durjay thought he saw something move among the trees.


Back on the porch, Aparna adjusted her camera, aiming it at the sky. “Look at that—no light pollution, just stars everywhere. It’s like the universe is showing off.”

Durjay pulled his jacket tighter, his gaze drifting to the treeline where the lanterns’ glow faded into darkness. “It’s stunning. But stay close, okay? I don’t like how quiet it’s gotten.”

She laughed softly. “You’re paranoid. It’s just—”

A twig snapped in the woods, sharp and close. They froze, peering into the shadows. A figure stood just beyond the light—tall, still, its features lost to the dark.

“Hey!” Durjay shouted, stepping forward. “Who’s out there?”

The figure vanished, melting into the trees with a faint rustle. Aparna grabbed his arm. “You saw that, right? That wasn’t my imagination.”

“No,” he muttered, his pulse racing. He turned back to the window and noticed something—a rough, jagged symbol scratched into the sill. He traced it with his fingertip, a cold knot forming in his stomach.

“Let’s go inside now” he said quietly, “tomorrow we’re figuring this out.”

Beyond the porch, the forest stood silent, its serenity unbroken yet heavy with secrets, whispering through the mist and the swaying deodars.