What is your opinion?
The Swan In the Rain
"Absolutely loving this story! Added to my favorites (in hopes that it will stay their by the end of the story)! The twists and turns are intriguing and hook my attention. I’m hoping that in the end Lord Blackwood and Anoria can reach their happy ending together. I’m crossing my fingers in hopes that their newfound love will be tried, be in the end their bond will only be stronger. I love the compelling plot and writing structure the author uses and am excited to see what happens next! * Note to Author: Thank you for creating this remarkable story! I understand how much time and effort it must take to create such a master piece (that's saying a lot since I've only just finished reading the 3rd chapter lol!) I've tried writing my own novel but was utterly exhausted by the time I finished my first twelve chapters! for me personally, the hardest part is figuring what should happen next after I'm finally satisfied with my chapter. I know I still have more to read, but just to put it out there, I know it may be useful to hear different ideas just to get some inspiration to help you plan out the story. I don't know how you want your story to end, or if you already have it planned out, but just to put it out there I thought of a couple interesting plot twists that I personally would like to see played out with this story. One of my ideas is that maybe at some point of time, a new threat comes in play. Maybe Lord Blackwood finds out Anoria has been (somehow) kidnapped/almost kidnapped/threatened/ almost hurt/ and is in danger. This could lead to Lord Blackwood feeling a deep anxiety that he's never felt before (sparks his awareness that he really does care for her and loves her, and would do anything to get her back/get rid of the threat/ keep her safe/ never let her be hurt by anyone else again. Anoria is frightened but strong! she will not be used/taken by this new threats and fights to return to her newfound love Lord Blackwood, and to regain her freedom. despite her fear and challenges she only becomes stronger and more courageous, she doesn't give up hope and knows deep down that Lord Blackwell will save her. The Threat (a new captor) was fascinated by Anoria's beauty and wanted to have her for himself. He originally had planned to rob the king of his riches(or whatever) but came upon the beautiful woman (anoria) and had a change of plans. He wants to claim her and keep her for himself, but knows the dangers of being caught by the intimidating Lord Blackwell. so, he quickly and quietly takes the girl captive and barely escapes and travels to bring her to his own kingdom where his army awaits and can be protected and keep his treasure before the Lord Blackwell can catch and kill him. but [the threat] struggles along his journey as the girl he captured seems to be more feisty and strong-willed than he expected. she causes plenty of trouble and makes the travel back much more challenging than he would like. He makes sure that if he punishes her, he never scars hurts her beautiful face, otherwise that would be a waste. little does the threat know that Lord Blackwood is on his track and is determined to get his wife back. That's just an idea, of course you don't have to listen to me, I just wanted to share it so that so could have some ideas, and because trust you could make a wonderful story with this plot twist. Thanks again for your time and for making this story! keep up the good work!"
Swan beauty
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