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"Jon Wicky has written something profound. The way his writing in this shifts and morphs keeps the attention of the reader, never allowing your mind to become bored with one style. At the beginning, it seemed like a fun bad luck story, but as you read the words, you find something much larger waiting for you. This story is not just entertaining, it's a lesson, a theory, a way of thinking and something we can ponder if we wish. You are a unique writer, Jon Wicky, an odd-ball. But it's the odd ball that takes a seemingly simple idea, and makes it memorable. Thank you, Jon, for sharing a part of your mind with the world. I look forward to reading what is next."

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