What is your opinion?
Nightwalker
"Extremely well written. I would purchase rhe book if it indeed were a book and not just the beginning. And from what I can tell there are no plans to finish it. Got me all involved and then dropped me"
Congratulations and well done!
"I love the range of characters throughout! I do feel like the use of a denouement chapter would finish this story off well but for your first work being out there for others to read this is stellar!!!"
Expecting
"Reading this book was genuinely challenging for someone whose first language isn’t English, but despite constantly going back and forth between the dictionary and the sentences, I still enjoyed reading it. However, the ending felt very rushed and unfinished. There were still many events and storylines that needed closure, but they were never addressed. I also think it would have been better if you had explained more about the child’s story, what Xavier actually knew about them, and what eventually happened to the other characters."
