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Before he forget me

"This story plot is good its gets me hooked on. I liked the chemistry between Jack and Ava.I really loved how u use the emoji to express their emotion."

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My first and best romantic story

"I really liked the story the POV style helped me blend in with characters. Jace and Ava chemistry is very good. Overall story was jem"

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""‘Before He Forget Me’ is a touching story that really pulls at your emotions. The characters feel real, and the plot keeps you engaged from start to finish. I really enjoyed it!" "

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Quick chapters (important to me) Fun, quirky YA romance

"It's one of those tear through it easily reads. With some caveats. It's a little dramatic at times but so are some teens so maybe that works? I don't know. There's a lack of continuity and sometimes things feel a little on the nose/unrealistic. BUT as I said, it's a binge read, click bait type of read. If you're into YA romance, it's going to scratch that itch. You'll adore it. Personal note to author: I would change the title. It doesn't give fun or upbeat vibes. It sounds sad... And while she is upset about the break up, I think it's actually a fun, lively read. Pick a better title to reflect that"

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BESTTTT

"I dont know hiw to start. I mean this book is just... AMAZING... FANTASTIC... PERFECT. The mystery, the suspense, the chaos, the blend of emotions, i cant i cant rate it. Its out if range. Author believe me i love your work. And i want more chapters soon. The suspemse is killing me. Please post more ASAP I cant wait"

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When Love Forgets but the Heart Remembers

"This story hits like a gut-punch wrapped in silk. Ava’s heartbreak is palpable, raw and incredibly relatable. You don’t just read about her pain; you live it.The story is so relatable,it reminds me that sometimes, the hardest goodbye comes with a second chance—and the courage to face it. I cried a lot and I can't wait for a update, everyone needs to read this book."

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Hooked

"This book got me hooked, without even realizing it, I had read from the beginning to the last chapter, hopefully there's more to come"

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Perfect story!

"Trust me girl this is freaking perfect!! The suspense, the drama, offf already i love it,, grow more girllll, I just started reading and i couldn't stop tbh, I just read everything thru 1 to 2 hrs it's perfect!!! Cant wait for moree"

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Good story

"I enjoyed all I’ve read so far, nice style of writing keep it up, and hope you can read mine soon"

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Amazing, plot, characters, and everything

"This is amazing and i need more asap! I love the plot of this and cant wait for you to update it. The grammar is flawless I honestly love everything about your writing style."

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Awesome read

"My first word to the author is that this story is FABULOUS. I absolutely like the setting. We need this high-school stories in our community often. Also, the writing style matches the setting just like a perfect prom dress. I love how Ava has that childish vibe. Not a 30 year old trapped in a teen's body, like most stories out there. I was only aware of some grammatical errors like in the title, it would have been better if we could keep grammar in mind. Instead of 'Before he Forget me', it would be correct if the title was 'Before he forgets me'. If it has a symbolic meaning, then I am no one to judge. My well wishes to the author. Your snappy sentences actually related with my school life. Though I read in a girl's school, we get weird text threads and DMs from creepy boys (Actually the stranger texts are getting me)."

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"I am really getting interested for the further chapter and I really hope Jace is Jack . idk why , I haven't even known anything about Jack but still my heart is saying that Jack is Jace .. truly I am loving this story... "

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Before He Forgot Me

"This is a real work of art right from the heart. There is nothing like to exaggerated in this story, but it's just the simple words of the heart entwined with some imagination and word play."

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+5

"I’m not sure how others will feel, but I personally really enjoyed this book. In a sea of generic fanfics and repetitive plots, this story stands out with real originality and the feel of a true novel.... ++++ 5"

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Review for “Before He Forget Me” by Midnight Words

"I’m still in the early chapters of Before He Forget Me, but I can already say there’s something addictive about it. While it’s not exactly my favorite genre, I have to admit it keeps you turning the pages. Set in a high school environment filled with rumors and emotional tension, the story explores heartbreak and personal struggles in a way that’s easy to relate to for fans of dramatic, romantic reads. The author’s writing flows nicely and keeps the pace engaging. A light and emotional read — perfect for those who enjoy intense romance with a touch of teen drama."

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