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Magic and finding identity

"Fun wrapped in choas, insecurity, identity crisis, trauma, throw in an evil entity and you get to read a coming of age story of finding your path. I look forward to reading the next book in this series. 😁 "

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Mira's magical mishaps

"Great story, very entertaining. I loved it "

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Beautiful💜 Thank you 🥰

"Thank you for an amazing story. Your an amazing storyteller. I've enjoyed it so much.... When you wrote the bit "nearly peed myself" I was giggling so much I too nearly peed myself. There was suspense, laughter in bucket loads and my emotions were all over the place. Some sad bits, some feel for that particular character moments, some total hilarious moments. Beautifully put together. I would recommend to anyone for a read to just get pure enjoyment from an imaginative characterful story with plenty of laughing out loud moments. Can't wait for the rest of the series you're planning. "

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Couldn't put it down

"Very well written. Strong female lead. Lots of laughs with some magic spri kled in. I was so excited to read you were going to make this a series! The end was not expected at all. Throughout the whole story you were so vivid with your descriptions, I could clearly invision the scene. I have no doubt you will be a well k own author some day best of luck on your journey. "

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I love everything about the novel

"The plot was well arranged. The characters have been introduced so well and everything was well in order. Visualization was well done "

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It's good

"The storyline has good flow. It keeps the reader engaged. The humor is enough that it makes you chuckle but not so that you think it's corny. I am now anxiously waiting for more chapters to read. Hope they are posted soon. The author's punctuation and grammar skills are great. "

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