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Our paths are connected: Mysterious deaths

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Summary

Michael and Abigail - typical highschool couple with relatively normal lives. That was about to change. Local gang of bullies started terrorizing the school and girls were disappearing only to be found dead. Authorities prove useless, so these two teens with the help of Michael's dad and 2 transfer students decide to conduct their own investigation.

Genre
Thriller
Author
M15AV20
Status
Complete
Chapters
26
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

1st Lt.s Paul and Lenka Cherry - military couple serving in one of the most prestige units in the Army of the Czech republic - Paratrooper regiment. Every mission was a success. They always held strong no matter the danger. They were always ready to help fellow soldiers, allies and civilians. Units under them didn't suffer any casualties until one day.

They were targeting a very dangerous paramilitary group in Africa, who somehow knew they were coming. Both Paul and Lenka were severely injured and took a long time to recover. Because of the injuries they had to retire and were demoted to Active reserves. Soon afterwards Lenka got pregnant and they had a baby boy. But something went wrong and Lenka passed away due to blood loss. Her last wish was for Paul to raise their son Michael into a good person just like them. Paul then became more isolated.

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