Very compelling

"I really love your riding style, but it kept me engaged the majority of the books on this site and the other Sister site frustrating me. I would say the part where she passes out from having sex for the first time is really out there. It is written like someone who’s never had sex. A suggestion would be to explain why or to have her get through it like so many other women did. Otherwise, I have no other critiques engaging, and I want to know more. Thank you."