What is your opinion?
The Misunderstood Lesson
"This is a very powerful story!! It's heartbreaking but inspiring. Without giving away the story, I will say that some lessons are learned too late and often misunderstood. Good story! Good writing! Good reading! ☺️"
A Story That Stays With You
"I really enjoyed reading this story. The life lesson it carries is beautiful, and what made it even more impactful is how realistic and relatable everything felt. It doesn't try too hard to be dramatic because the situations and emotions are things many people can connect with. One of my favorite parts was how every chapter begins with a quote about life that perfectly matches the flow of the story. It made each chapter feel more meaningful and gave me something to think about before reading on. I also loved how clearly the difference between Zainab and Yaqoob was portrayed. Their views on life are so different, and that contrast made both characters feel authentic and memorable. To Author, I wanted to say more but I'll zip my mouth. No spoilers. I LOVE THIS STORY. 😂🥰❤️"
A Story That Stays With You
"It was absolutely beautiful and deeply meaningful. The story moved at a brisk pace that kept me engaged from beginning to end without ever feeling slow or tiring. It was also emotional and thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impression."
An honest story that makes you think.
"Although it's a short story, it conveys everything it needs to: the harshness of life, the cycles passed down from parents to children, mistakes, and misinterpretations. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys reading stories with profound content and a clear message."
The Misunderstood Lesson 💔❤️
"This is a powerful story, the misunderstanding is a sad lesson of wasting one’s life, even in illness this man still believed that saving money was more important than saving his own life. This was a brilliant story, I really enjoyed reading it.❤️💔"
A powerful short story - The misunderstood lesson 💜
"What words for such a powerful short story, you have talent and this is a Second book of yours I have read. 💜 The story is very powerful with the meaning of love and legacy, without giving anything away for future readers. 💜 This was a true pleasure to read and thank you for sharing with us, the characters felt so real which is insanely brilliant. 💜 Emotions were high for me with this read. 💜 Highly recommend 💜 ."
More than a short story
"A really moving short story about ambition, dedication, and what love and legacy are really about. About what we leave behind, what matters to us, and what truly counts. If this was your first story, I’m excited to see more from you — your talent really shows. I really liked the characters—they felt super real and easy to relate to. You struck a great balance between the different perspectives. I caught myself worrying, hoping, and wondering how it would all turn out. 🩶 Thanks for sharing your stories."
Emotional And Heartfelt!
"It was so close to reality that I had to think a million of times that how, and just how the author has been able to write down such a great work_a master piece though!💫 The stories I had read were never like this one! It was so real, emotional, and moralable. The author has poured such beautiful thoughts, feelings, and quotes that I appreciate it's every line.✨ The ending was so emotional that my heart still feels it's weight. Rehan, his father, Yaqoob, and Yaqoob's father, all were inherited with the same line: "For the worst time!" Yaqoob understood the secrecey of words with his last breaths, and Rehan just looked up for someone to make him understand, but again no one was there to make him understand then.🥺 I praise your writing by my heart Saher!💌 It's surely recommended for those who are close to reality, truths of society, and who know the undenied fact for what worth money holds in our society, also, and all the genuinely said feelings to be heard.🤍 Love from Reem Anu!💕"
