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Someone's Secret

Summary

Unspoken love, hidden hearts, and fate's unexpected twists" Two college students, Nick and Mia, secretly harbor feelings , but their love remains unconfessed. On their respective birthdays, they plan to reveal their secrets to their best friends, Anna and Jacob. In a surprising turn of events, Anna and Jacob confess their love for each other, leaving Nick and Mia heartbroken, their secrets still untold.

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
3.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

In Another Life, Maybe

Everyone has a story some are written in books some are confined in the hearts of people.."

This is also a story which was confined in the hearts of two people which started in Sanford university .

The weather feels so peaceful today I have seen her walking into the campus from a distance...Her lips curved up into a smile...Her hair is falling onto forehead as the wind touched her..

Her eyes sparkled as she saw her friends.

She waved at them. she went running to them just like a little kid...Seeing her makes me feel so joyful "I love her so much but in silence" I hate to see her in sadness it hurts me so badly.. She feels like my comfort place but she doesn't know it

I am afraid to tell her that I love her what if she doesn't feel the same about me.. Maybe Like this I get to see her everyday but If I confess what if she goes away from me and I can't take that.

Just then someone called 'Nick what are you doing here" I looked back to see my best friend Jacob who is more like a brother. Hey bro! What's up I went to him and he wished me HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRO!! and hugged me Tonight I have a surprise for you and today I am also gonna confess to the girl I love and introduce her to you.

Wow you love someone that's shocking you never told me about her Is she beautiful I said.. I thought it was just a crush but after spending time with her I realized that I love her and of course she is beautiful anyway you're gonna see her tonight. Yep I am waiting to see the girl who made you fall in love. I said

We both went to our class talking

On the other side....

Mia....shouted my best friend I looked back to see her panting. What happened Anna I asked her

Look I got you smtg she said and handed me a small box. What is this I questioned her. Open it and find out amor(love) I smiled and opened the box and saw a chain with heart locket I looked at her. She said HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMOR and she hugged me and then helped me wear the chain.

She often gives me sister vibes and she is the most beautiful girl with the most beautiful soul I have ever met till now. Tonight I have surprise for you and you will definitely love it she said just then her phone rang and the call name is "mi amor(my love)" My love I said shockingly I never knew you had a boyfriend I exclaimed He is not my bf yet my dear tonight I will propose him and I will introduce him to you actually I never thought I would love him unless I started spending my time with him she said OMG!!!! When did all this happen. am I living in a parallel world all these days or what I said . No I just didn't tell you as I was not even sure about it and now I think I know that I love him so.. she said. Oh god I am very excited to see the boy who made you fall in love.

Anna went to meet the teacher for some reason and I walked through the corridor and I saw him our eyes met for a sec and I felt it like it was forever and all the world around me disappeared I broke the eye contact as I walked past him.

He makes my heart beat a little fast but he is not even aware of it.. I LOVE HIM LIKE BREATHING but he doesn't know about it. Tbh I am afraid to tell him that I love him. what if he doesn't feel the same. I can't take that.

He doesn't even know but...

{His smile makes me happy

His tears make me sad

His anger scares me

His silence calms me

His eyes spoke the unspoken words

He is a magician who has put me under a spell which only he can break...}

Later that night....

Mia and Anna are in the amusement park celebrating Mia's bday

Nick and Jacob are also in the same place celebrating Nick's bday

After sometime

Anna&Jacob: Come I will show you the person I love...

Only then four of them met

Mia: I was looking at him with the happiest smile until I realized that his attention is on someone else.

Nick: : I was looking at her with the amusement until I realized that her attention is on someone else.

Mia&Nick(pov):

I looked beside and saw that my best friend is looking at the person I love..

Maybe I was too late and now the person I love is the person my best friend love.

Anna&Jacob:

I want to tell you smtg

Okay you first..

Laughs

Okay let's say it together..

I love you...

Omg (They both hugged each other)

Mia&Nick:( clapped) congrats both of you

I never expected you guys to surprise me like this I will definitely remember this bday forever.. as it taught me a very important lesson and gave me some memories too

Anna&Jacob didn't hear the last line properly

Nilck's POV

Nick: Maybe she was meant to be in my heart but not in my fate

She will never know how much I love her and he will never know that "He fell in love with someone's secret"

Mia's POV

Mia: Maybe he was meant to be in my prayers but not in my life

he will never know how much I love him and she will never know that "She fell in love with someone's secret"

On that day....

Two hearts found love and two hearts remain heart broken.

Just like them, aren't we all someone's secret too?


...The End...

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