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I learned a lot from this book

"Even though it was a twist psychology but I learned to be very careful with whom I trust and let in my life. It also taught me that step children can be dangerous at times I love your writing style Just that I am sad because I didn't see them get married and have their own baby "

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Fantastumawsome

"This book is so fire. This is kinda crazy though cuz I'm Mexican and my man is chocolate ( black) and we have a son together and it fits this book to a t. Would love to see more work like this. Can't wait to read what happens next."

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It’s a fuck ton of ups and downs

"I loveeeeee this story truly at first the lingo was a lil cringe especially when the male mc would say nigga(I’m black) buhh it’s rlly good story once you read it through. Super excited for the next chapters and what’s to come every time I’m left thinking wtf idk what is happening next. AND PLZ FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DONT LET THIS INCESTUOUS BITCH DRUG HER BROTHER OR DO SUM WEIRD SHIT PLEASE AND IF SHE DOES DO SUM WEIRD SHIT LET HER DIE BEFORE OR DURING "

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Good read

"The book is so good."

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Story

"The story is good "

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Great book

"I’m really enjoying this book. Please upload more chapters."

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