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Anngalena's Revenge

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Summary

Anngalena was never meant to survive. Bullied at school. Abused at home. Ignored by the world. She hid her body behind baggy clothes and her heart behind silence. But when a violent attack in a dark alley steals everything she has—including her life—something darker wakes up in her place. One year later, she's back. Beautiful. Deadly. Unrecognizable. The same students who mocked her now worship her. The cheerleaders envy her. The jocks fantasize about her. But none of them realize who she is… or why she's here. She didn’t return to forgive. She came back to feed. One party. One cabin. One night of payback. They thought she was gone. But Anngalena never left. She evolved.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: The New Girl

The first bell of the day screamed through the halls of West G High.


Lockers slammed, sneakers squeaked, and teenage voices filled the air. Somewhere in the crowd, Anngalena moved like a ghost—wrapped in a large, faded hoodie and baggy jeans that swallowed her figure. Her dark afro sat unbothered by trends, unpressed, unstyled, and free. But even in her silence, eyes followed her.


> Lauren (snickering to Ashley):

“Why she hiding all that with them baggy clothes? Girl shaped like a whole Coke bottle and wanna look like a trash bag.”




> Ashley (whispering, glancing sideways):

“I heard she just moved here… her daddy broke or somethin’. Probably only owns that one outfit.”




> Keisha (mocking loud enough to be heard):

“Where you get them clothes from? Glad Bag Couture?”




Laughter. Loud. Cruel. Targeted.


Anngalena’s hands tightened around her backpack straps. Her face stayed forward, but her cheeks burned red hot. She kept moving—fast—heading to her locker, heart pounding.


> Narrator (soft, grim):

“She was different. And different? That gets hunted.”




This wasn’t home. Not yet. Just another battlefield with prettier walls.

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