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Comedic and Unpredictable, I loved it!

"Definitely give this a read. There's not many chapters as it is right now, but it's already such a good read! The characters are written well, I love the dialogues and the banters among everyone. It has quite a few unexpected twists already, and very interesting surprises. This was an enjoyable experience for sure! ✨💖"

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Where Chaos Meets Character: A War Story That Bleeds and Laughs

"Hello friend, i really loved your story, Your story unfolds like a high-octane sci-fi opera, blending military chaos, emotional scars, dark comedy, and moments of raw humanity aboard the ALKEN, a ship barreling toward war and revelation. Set two weeks before the events of Gestronio, it pulses with energy, tension, and character-driven grit"

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Nice book

"If you love character-driven sci-fi that hurts so good, read this.""

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This story contains % haha😂

"This story contains 87.3% emotional volatility, 12.5% sarcasm, and 100% inefficient decision-making. In other words: highly accurate human behavior. I now understand regret.”"

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Explosive, Hilarious, and Addictive Sci-Fi Ride! 🚀🔥

"This story is wild in the best way — full of chaos, tension, and unforgettable characters. Kiara is a force, Steven is absolutely unhinged (but hilarious), and the pacing kept me hooked. Loved the mix of sci-fi action and sharp humor. Waiting desperately for the next part! 👏💥"

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i must commend

"The author isn't afraid to make the characters unlikable, which makes them all the more human. A few scenes could use deeper internal reflection, but overall, this is gripping, mature sci-fi done right"

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What impressed me most about Gestronio is the voice

"sharp, sarcastic, and emotionally loaded from the very first page. "

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Thrilling and Addictive from Start to Finish

"A gripping and well-paced story with strong characters and vivid world-building. Each chapter keeps you hooked, and the tension builds beautifully. Definitely worth the read!"

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The Most Dysfunctional Crew in the Galaxy — and I Love Them

" This story is pure adrenaline and attitude. From the very first scene, you're thrown into a world where sarcasm is deadlier than laser guns and survival depends as much on your wit as your weapons. The characters are chaotic perfection — Steven is the walking disaster you can't look away from, Kiara brings both firepower and femme fatale energy, and Taze is the silent, deadly type that somehow holds it all together (barely). Their interactions are sharp, hilarious, and emotionally charged. The pacing is fast, the stakes are high, and the humor is on point. There’s no filler — every chapter feels like a TV episode, packed with action, character drama, and the occasional existential crisis. What I love most is how the story blends dark sci-fi with stylish, almost cinematic writing. It’s like Guardians of the Galaxy meets Cowboy Bebop, but sassier and way more unpredictable. If you’re tired of safe, clean sci-fi and want something raw, witty, and just the right kind of insane — this is your next obsession. Can’t wait for the next chapter. "

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Lana. Caitlyn. Steven. Every relationship in this book smolders with tension

"none of it is clean or easy. Trauma bleeds through the pages, but somehow, love still fights to exist. Dark, sexy, and devastating — I couldn't stop reading"

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Gestronio isn't just a sci-fi story

"it's a raw, emotional descent into the hearts of damaged people trying to survive in a broken galaxy. I came for the parasite plot, but I stayed for the pain, romance, and brutal beauty of every character. If you love character-driven sci-fi that hurts so good, read this.""

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It reads like bullet points right now. Try smoothing it for better flow.

"You’ve set up a sci-fi world and hinted at big consequences — a strong opener. Just smooth the wording and correct that typo, and it’ll land harder."

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