Cosmic sci-fantasy with real stakes!

"The premise of Tivonna racing against a deadline tied to her elemental power, with a mysterious last-of-his-kind telepath showing up right on time, is such a compelling setup. Love the scale of the star systems in ruins too. Great start!"

Great story

"I really enjoyed the story. Can't wait for the next book. Maybe it was me, there was time and day given as a sub title. I didn't notice any other subtitle like that. Just confused me a little. If it's a countdown, then maybe a reference can be made to the event."

Firehawks

"I like the camaraderie between the guys. I think Tivonna fits right in. The Centaurs are a change in characters. I hope to meet more diverse space species "

Nice

"I loved them, and I think they are must read. There is ongoing Novelstar’s writing competition, you may want to try."

Koisan

"I looked the plot and the writing but I would like there to be more clarity when a point of view I'd being changed"

Unfinished story

"Good bones. Interesting writing style. Enjoyed reading "

Awesome!

"I loved this story! I kept wanting to read the next page. I can't wait for the next book! I've got to know what happens! "

Good

"Good start"

Kiosan

"I liked how the story line and plot moved quickly"

Kiosan

"The writing style is great had my attention from start to finish, I had a great liking for the characters and a fundamental understanding for the world that grew accordingly with the growth of the book 10/10 read!"

Waiting for more exited about this storyline

"This was more than I though it would be disappointed that there isn’t more please tell me you’re updating soon "

Kiosan

"What a story, takes me a while to get into a novel bit this one had me almost from the word go, can't wait for future chapters or stories keep up the great work, thankyou."

Amazing

"The Author has an amazing talent for building both the characters and story. Love everything I have read so far and super excited to finish the story, keep up the great work."

Excellent read

"I always approach Fantasy stories written by new authors with some trepidation due to this genre's tendency to attract some real amateur Hacks. In reading Kiosan I was delighted to find a story that was well written with an engaging plot. The grammar was above average rendering a clear understanding of what the author is intending to say. The story is interesting and to my mind similar in style to many of the stories written by Andre Norton when she was in her prime. The highest praise I can bestow is the fact that I eagerly await the stories continuation."

Kiosan

"Well written and engaging story. Thank you"

Really Cool So Far

"To be honest, I just started it and are only 5 chapters in but it's terrifically written and all I wanna know is what happens next to Tivonna and Jason."

Novel idea in an awesome package

"This hss been a wonderful read. It made my fantasy soar and not once did I feel bored or distracted by inconsistencies I find the characters, setting, plot and the writing style all very good and I hope the story will be updated soon!"

So far it’s excellent

"The novel is not completed yet, but what has been written so far has been excellent. The story is interesting and I like the characters, I can’t wait to learn more about Jasen, his people and abilities. I am hoping that when he has his full power (no more details as I don’t want to spoil anything) he will also have all of his memories. "

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Love it

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