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Un Relato de Miedo

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Summary

un relato de terror abstracto, donde elmiedo no se le da nombre peo esta ahi, te invito a leer en la noche , solo este relato y deirme que te parecio

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Capítulo 1

Es curioso como hay miedos que ganan nombres, tinen forma y se les da un rostro.en sueños grito esos nombres, escucho gritos, llantos y sollozos y me pregunto si son mios o de alguien mas. siento entre mis pies descasos la ierra humeda, el pasto mojado y el viento que silva en mis oidos frio, todo frio por el rocio de la noche que deja fria y humeda la noche.

no se si lo que escuchar fue un grito o el viento jugando una broma. corro, huyo y me escondo mientras el bosque me atormenta con las ramas crujiendo a mi alrededor , el viento cantando en mi oido y el sonido de lo que se esconde en sus sombras, no digas su nombre, que esta noche la luna siempre cambiente nos a abandonado, esta nche timida se a escondido en la sombre de la noche en el infinito firamentos. mientra las estrellas distante , indiferentes observan el terror que ocurre entre troncos y ramas.

Es curioso, el miedo esta noche tiene nombre y no lo voy a decir,porque si lo nombo lo llamo y temo que si lo llamo y no pueda corre.

si tienes miedo, si estas solo, si estas asustado, No lo nombres , No lo Llames , porque talvez ya no puedass huir

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