What is your opinion?
This holds on to you.
"I don't know how to really describe this story. It is like the work is poetry at times. This writing makes you feel things... deep things that linger under your skin in all the good ways. It isn't a driven book that makes you feel rushed or in a hurry to finish. No, this is like fine wine to coat your tongue and taste the words, all the words, every last one, until it sinks into your belly like heat. I have never read writing so much like chocolate. It felt like this melted for me. I really wish I could describe this better. It isn't a zooming story, but it is all the better for it's pace and rhythm. If you like sweet boy on boy, this is a good read."
Only in my dreams
"As an avid reader I've read many stories before ranging from horrible to exceptional. This one is teetering at the edge of exceptional. The plot was marvelous and very different. The characters were as real as they can get experiencing real human emotions. The grammar, spelling and punctuation was exceptional. I particularly enjoyed the use of language and wording. I feel as though there is one character whose feelings and outcome weren't portrayed clearly and in depth (Kaimu's Girlfriend) but I guess the story wasn't about her. I would recommend the story to anyone who enjoys reading short well crafted stories with mind blowing storylines. "
Really good start
"I just read the first chapter and I really liked the writing style. It’s soft but also kind of intense in this quiet way. The main character feels super real, like someone you’d actually know. It’s emotional without trying too hard, and I like how it just drops you into the moment without explaining everything. There’s something about the atmosphere that stuck with me. It feels close, like you’re right there in the room. I’m definitely interested to see where it goes."
