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🙌(the girl's still watching through the mirror)

"A story about a responsible girl , tryin to do her best to feed and nourish her siblings ...that's what I thought at first thought nevertheless saw it was horror with genre but didnt knew it would be this compelling havnt read or saw something like this but maybe ill start start reading more and more after seeing how good ones writing can change my perspectives."

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Inheritance of shadow

"The story was absolutely gripping from start to finish. The suspense built with every chapter, culminating in a thrilling climax that kept me completely hooked. Just when I thought I knew how it would end, the story took a totally unexpected turn. The ending was shocking and brilliant! A friend of mine recommended it, and I’m so glad I gave it a try. Definitely one of the best book I’ve come across. Such an intense and well-crafted story huge applause to the writer’s hard work 👏"

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Just Let it be Horror Instead TT

"I was really really on and off to read this coz first of all that horror tag... Dear writer.. how could you mess and play with my feelings like this. ಥ⁠_⁠ಥ My dear Aria, sorry if I always thought you were spooky. You're an angel! Even in the midst of that why am I hoping for a romance tag to pop up between you and sir Liam ahem.. Overall fr, great story. I should've read it sooner, I look forward to reading your other works.. (⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴗ⁠ꈍ⁠) "

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It's really amazing

"It was recommended by a friend of mine and i thought why not let's give it a shot and it was one of the best decisions of my life. The story and characters got me hooked. Every line was a suspense for me. I was thinking what's gonna happen next and it kept me on my toes. Ending wasn't what i expected but overall it was a great experience. Hope to read more of her work when i get time. Thankyou for writing this masterpiece. Have a good day. 😄"

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Aria💜

"A debt is a debt and payment is payment, everyone is freed and Aria accepts her fate as the sacrifice to end it/be that payment. Atleast Aria is holding onto a single hope as her only sense of freedom is the thought that her siblings will live and grow having a peaceful life. A story worth to remember, that not everything can be free and just forgotten, that payment is sometimes a must 😭 Ariaaaaaaaa 😭"

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inheritance of shadows

"The story was truly fascinating and terrifying at the same time. The vivid descriptions made me feel as if I were part of the scenes, and the suspense kept me turning pages eagerly. The endings were shocking yet satisfying, making the stories stand out as a thrilling and unforgettable experience!!!!! great work sakura sis!!!!!!"

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Edge of my Seat

"It's been a while since I last read a thriller as good as this one. Well staged; characters real; the fear palpable; the climax rising in balanced increments. Excellent story."

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Absolutely thrilling

"I read the story and even though horror is not the genre I love so much I still loved this story to no ends. Truly the plot, the story buildup, the characterization and the way the story advances its something to look up to. This story has kept me hooked till the end and I could not breathe a sigh of relief until it was done. The story is great and the way it is written had made me feel those emotions with the characters themselves. Keep up the amazing work Sakura and hope to see more such work of yours."

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Inheritance of Shadows

"This story is like taking a walk through a very surreal dream/nightmare in the best of ways. It's fast paced but very well thought out, and the plot is great so far! What I love is that it's a genuine horror thriller story and it's done exceptionally well: no fluff, and no fillers needed. No spoilers, but a particular chapter played heavily on a personal paranormal thrill of mine, and it was exciting, well executed, and made my spine tingle! Quick read, but exceptionally well written and suspenseful, and had me turning the pages swiftly for answers. I can't wait to find out the conclusion. (My only notation was some punctuation issues here and there, but literally nothing at all that ruins or distracts from the actual storyline, but rather just a note for the author to catch the next time they go through for edits. God knows we all have the same issues as lonely writers, and it could very well just be a formatting glitch.) Really glad I stumbled across Sakura on Discord! Great job, author! Can't wait to read the rest! "

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Great work

"Love the story telling and how every twist and turn made you feel like you were there "

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