What is your opinion?
One small mistake
"When the enemy attacked the Head Quarter, they made a small mistake. They didn't check out if Chase Masters was in . And now , she is temporary in charge and not even the powers of gods can stop her ..."
A WWI Occult Adventure
"Obviously the Chance Masters stories should be a series. Can each adventure be turned into a novella? Or keeping with tradition you could combine several into one book. For the future though aim for novels. The story was boosted by the research and bolstered by the writing. Maybe infuse a little more history and atmosphere. All in all a decent occult adventure. Readers will want more. You could also use a short story like this to kick off a St. Petersburg tale ensuring it would become at least a novella. One aspect we will never know is whether the Eye of Odin would have had any negative affects on the German. Magic has its price."
