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A Beautiful Story

"I began reading this story with the thought that I probably wouldn't be finishing it because it started very slow, in my opinion. I am happy to say that it picks up and takes off. I appreciate authors who can write where the words become visible as you're reading. A small heading would help to know when the characters change as you read would be helpful, but other than that I have enjoyed this story very much and I am awaiting the rest of the story. Keep up the good work."

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Review I like the character so much. I would recommend this book to my future bf. I choose the rating because it deserves i. The author and her mind is such a piece of art that I would like to read it again and again...

"Review I like the story so much I would recommend this story to my future bf I would really appreciate the work of the author and for making such a piece of art..."

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Review I like the character so much. I would recommend this book to my future bf. I choose the rating because it deserves i. The author and her mind is such a piece of art that I would like to read it again and again...

"Review I like the story so much I would recommend this story to my future bf I would really appreciate the work of the author and for making such a piece of art..."

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Review I like the character so much. I would recommend this book to my future bf. I choose the rating because it deserves i. The author and her mind is such a piece of art that I would like to read it again and again...

"Review I like the story so much I would recommend this story to my future bf I would really appreciate the work of the author and for making such a piece of art..."

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Review I like the character so much. I would recommend this book to my future bf. I choose the rating because it deserves i. The author and her mind is such a piece of art that I would like to read it again and again...

"Review I like the story so much I would recommend this story to my future bf I would really appreciate the work of the author and for making such a piece of art..."

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Excellent So Far

"This is a different werewolf story than any other one I have ever read. I absolutely love the characters and how will the plot is developing. I really love the two main characters and even the secondary characters in this story. So far this story has been amazing, and I am completely invested in it, and I hope that the ending is equally as strong."

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Exciting, intriguing story thus far…

"This is an amazing story filled with good dialogue, internal and external conflict, pack politics, love, betrayal, and regret with some musicality mixed in for a well-rounded tale. Dwyn is a solid female main character, but I’d like to know more about her mother and father’s backstory/love story, esp. her mother so that we can understand why her heritage is so integral to her journey in becoming who she is meant to be. Also, when Kael rejects her, I know that it was supposed to be devastating and humiliating, but it just didn’t come across as bad as I think it was meant to be. I read about her pain, but I didn’t feel it or empathize with her. I think maybe it was because I didn’t buy that she and Kael had a genuine mate bond to start with? That being said, I still feel Kael has more feelings for Dwyn than Jaerin does (but I am at less than 33 chapters into the story thus far). It is apparent that Kael has regrets and wishes he had made a different choice regarding Dwyn. Then you have Jaerin on the other hand who is actively fighting his feelings and the mate bond pulling him towards Dwyn. I know that Jaerin has also been rejected, but come on! How much rejection is Dwyn supposed to take? The woman is an Alpha heir for goodness sakes. She is being treated so shabbily, and this is her love story! She’s the heroine! I feel like I need to fight for her since the author isn’t doing so right now. Perhaps this will change in later chapters? It’s giving me Omega energy, and I don’t think that’s who Dwyn is supposed to be esp. considering who her parents are/what her bloodline is. I will be patient and see how the story plays out. As you can see, the author has me hooked on this one…highly recommend."

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Great writing

"I'm almost to the end, and I'm sad it's going to be over but very happy it exists. Keep writing."

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Rejected By The Beta

"This has been very heartbreaking but such a good story to build strength in your life. These young people deserve so much better but afraid to reach for it. I think my daughter in law would really enjoy this story for that reason. "

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