Inkitt
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Only the beginning...

"I make this review understanding the author is making a sequel, which is great! I feel the story ends once it only began. I am the type of reader who loves a story to be about 40-70 chapters long 😂 and if possible LONGER. I just left feeling like the story was a little empty (but it's because it hasn't finished it's only book one guys.) Now, with me saying that, please understand the story is a good story! There are elements I loved down: ▪️Little historical teases ▪️Past life / Reincarnation ▪️Changes in narration to clarify past and present ▪️Well structured writing ▪️Mature Vibe I look forward to the next story! 𝓘𝓶𝓹𝓻𝓮𝓼𝓼 𝓓𝓲𝓿𝓲𝓷𝓲𝓽𝔂"

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