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Chosen by the moon

"Really good story. It is very well written. I just couldn't put it down. I read 70 chapters in 24 hrs,that's how good it is. Pixie,you're the best,keep those chapters coming please."

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Chosen by the moon

"Loved their journey on the story "

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Thank you

"Thank you for the update I love your book I can't wait to read more "

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Awesome!

"Eagerly awaiting the next chapters!"

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Definitely a page turner !

"Awesome story... especially like how Kane and Lyra interact . A love story without sexual encounters being shoved down your throat."

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Nicely done

"I am enjoying this story so far, very well written and paced to hold the reader’s interest. "

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Chosen by the moon

"Interesting story line . Just wish it was completed and ended on a cliffhanger 🙂"

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Curious what comes next

"Good adventure waiting to see where it goes"

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Wonderful plot

"I think the plot and grammar was great. Kept me interested wanting more. Definitely would recommend to my family and friends."

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Can't put it down!

"This book has me hooked! I love the gentle growth of love between Lyra and Kane. There's always something new around the corner, but it flows together well. There are little spelling/grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't take away from the story. I can't wait to see where this story goes!! "

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Ok book

"Find it interesting. The grammar is off in places. Like it's ai or a second language."

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Chosen by the Moon

"simple dialogue. amazing storyline. great characters!"

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Review

"I enjoy the plot. The chapters are too short, though. I did find minor grammatical errors, some misspelled words, and a couple sentences that needed more words to make sense."

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Good book, so far

"So far it's a great romantic plot Little slow in plot but keeps me reading. "

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good but shallow

"Good plot and strong characters. Good combining of physical training and majic. Early chapter had Kane training Lyra with wooden daggers but then he "began training" her with metal swords. Nothing in-between. Search of her old house was superficial, not looking for other things. they seemed to read her journal very slowly. Bastian did not seem to be asked many questions abour Lyra's past and her family. Didn't she want to know more? "

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