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Remember When-

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Summary

A Poem about how life is and was.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Remember When-

Remember When-

Remember when we used to obsess over things,

Remember when we used to think life was easier.

Remember when we used to play like idiots,

Remember when we used to cry over hurts

Remember when we used to obsess over things like crazy.

Remember when we used to be happy for everything.

Remember when we used to hide things.

Remember when we used to be creative

We forgot that first love was with us since we were born.

We forgot that the valuable person is always with us

We forgot that we used to be happy

We forgot we used to make sense.

We forgot little things, we forgot ourselves

We lost ourselves

Ten years ago, we used to be happy

Ten years later, we are overbearing

Ten years ago, we were light

Ten years later, we are draining

Remember, remember, we lost ourselves in a battle of life.

We forgot how to be happy.

We forgot how to make ourselves happy.

We forgot ourselves

We lost ourselves in a war



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hiiii

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Thank uu

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hello authour Hamsika sharma Nimmaturi really like your poem and it doesn't make sense and does have a good sense

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