Picking Up The Pieces
Finish

"Finish it please."

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Fizz

9 chapters read

So Good!

"This story is great so far, I'm loving the storyline and still waiting for the plot, it's a really sad story, yet I feel like the character when reading. The use of words and punctuation used makes the story much better. So far I would rate this story 9/10, I think that instead of repeating about Maddy several times, different terms could be used to express her."

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Fizz

9 chapters read

So Good!

"This story is great so far, I'm loving the storyline and still waiting for the plot, it's a really sad story, yet I feel like the character when reading. The use of words and punctuation used makes the story much better. So far I would rate this story 9/10, I think that instead of repeating about Maddy several times, different terms could be used to express her."

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Picking up the pieces

"Friends and family "

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