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Engaging plot

"There are a couple things that stood out to me during my second read that I think would be answered in the first book. Your writing style is a bit too technical but that doesn't detract from the plot itself but rather enhances it! I found myself hooked from the start with Vander, Maze, even The Marionette. The mystery is well founded and is it too bad to say my bias is Nami? 🫠 Overall engaging and immersive plot woven nicely tension, mystery, and suspense. Would definitely recommend! "

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