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Crimson Rhythm

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Summary

> Abandoned at seven. Murdered by her own father. She should’ve stayed dead… but she made a deal with Death. Bound by blood and vengeance, a forgotten girl returns — no longer human, no longer afraid. With crimson scars and a soul stitched to darkness, she rises through ash and agony to rewrite fate itself. From an orphaned street beggar to a soul-binding queen, her journey is carved in rituals, betrayals, and blood-soaked poetry. But even the dead want what’s owed... Now hunted by the spirit she once made a pact with, and stalked by the king of the underworld, she must decide: Will she destroy everything — or rule it all? Crimson Rhythm is a dark fantasy drenched in revenge, power, and haunting beauty. For readers who like cruel worlds, powerful female leads, and poetic storytelling twisted with shadows.

Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

🌑 Chapter 1: Abandoned Petals

At the age of seven, the world ended.


She was a child of crumbs and cold gutters,

knees torn from crawling on gravel,

eyes empty from looking for faces that once loved her.

Her parents had left—

like smoke escaping a broken chimney,

like promises never meant to be kept.


A policeman took pity.

He led her by the wrist like a balloon with no string.

“Let’s take you home,” he said.


But home was already rewritten.

A new daughter had replaced her.

New smiles painted the walls where her laughter once echoed.


Her father took her out that night,

said, “Let’s go for a walk.”

The stars watched as she was pushed into darkness.

No screams. Just silence.


A pond swallowed her.

The forest watched.

And the night forgot.


But death remembered.


She floated above her corpse—

face slit wide like a broken porcelain doll,

blood swirling in still waters.

She whispered into the void:


“Give me power, or leave me dead.”


The void answered...

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