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HONEST REVIEW

"its one of the best stories i hv read n i hv been reading for a year. so if u like degrading n jelousy as well as people not admitting their for the other person this story is 4 you . n to be honest i cried, not a lot nor so little. stay warned!!"

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Quadruplet Alphas' Slave Mate

"The storyline is good but drawn out unnecessarily in certain chapters. I expected the Slave Mate to be a much stronger character but she is glaringly dim and has not developed enough to fit the role of a Luna. I found the story revolved too much around Giselle and as a result just weakened the Alphas' and impeded their character development. "

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