Inkitt
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excellent so far

"chapter 2 was great i liked everything then I saw carmen at the end and she didn't look too happy after cooking and letting the food get cold cause of the three upstairs messing around with each other so I can't wait to see what chapter 3 brings and I want to know more on carmen she looks like the one I want to marry js."

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Very immersive, an experience of a read

"The imagery was excellent in my opinion. I had no trouble knowing who was saying or doing what, the descriptions were very detailed and digestible, the action was very enticing, easy to feel the emotions and reactions throughout the chapter. I didn't have a moment where I felt burdened while reading. It was long enough to take a journey through the pages and short enough where I didn't become fatigued while reading. Will definitely be reading it again. "

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Excited for more!

"This was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I thought the dynamic between the two characters was very cute. It adds an extra zest to the spicy scenes. I'm excited to see how the author will continue on developing these characters, and look forward to what creative scenes she might involve them in!"

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