What is your opinion?
Another one of your brilliant works
"I have read quite a bit of your writing, and this is nearing the zenith of your craft. You have really taken what you are good at and polished to the next level, and by that I mean absolutely fantastic dialogue, some of the best I've read, punchy and distinct characters that I can picture and hear in my head, and very steamy romance. I really like the setup, how you turned it on its head through Oceane's actions and her complex personality. She is outwardly innocent, seemingly a good girl, but we quickly see her as someone who's more complicated then she appears. You do a great job emphasizing the rituals behind dating are absent in blind dates, and that makes them especially awkward. I really like Sebastian, how his demeanor visibly shift once the mask falls away. It is the same with Oceane, who reveals a complex interior character. I like that there is some scandal in their lives, but nothing that would turn us off from the characters themselves. I'm curious about some of the events surrounding their meeting, such as Sebastian's best friend and knowing them both, the city in which they met each other (I forgot if you mentioned it) and drama related to previous connections. Very deep characters, interesting development. I sat down and read this in one fell swoop, had a great time doing so. You're an incredible writer, one of the best I've ever seen, and I look forward to sinking my teeth into the second chapter."
First date
"It was a really long first chapter, but I’ve got to say the dialogue was really amazing. Certainly never been on a first date like that while blind to date that is."
