Incomplete Love,🫂🥹🌸💯 by Lily004 at Inkitt
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Incomplete love,🫂🥹🌸💯

Summary

Salar, a ruthless villain, begins to change when he falls in love with the innocent and kind-hearted Bushra, while his uncle Shahzai wants him to marry his own daughter, Fajar. Fajar, unwilling to be part of a forced alliance, supports Salar in choosing love over power. Transformed by love, Salar leaves his dark past behind and returns as a better man, seeking redemption.

Genre
Adventure
Author
Lily004
Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

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Title: "Beneath the Villain's Heart"

Salar was the man everyone feared — cold, dangerous, and emotionally numb. Trained by his powerful uncle, Shahzai, since childhood, Salar had become a ruthless enforcer in a world ruled by crime and power. Shahzai had one wish: Salar must marry his daughter Fajar — a beautiful, dignified, yet emotionally distant girl who had been raised to protect the family’s legacy.

But Salar’s heart, for the first time, started to beat for someone else — Bushra, a quiet, kind-hearted girl who worked in a shelter for abandoned children. She was everything Salar wasn’t — innocent, empathetic, and full of light. She had no idea who he really was when he first came to her under a false identity while following Shahzai's orders. But her words, her trust, and the way she saw goodness in everyone began to shatter the walls around his heart.

As Salar struggled with his feelings, Shahzai announced the engagement of Salar and Fajar, without asking either of them. Fajar, however, was not in love with Salar. She had her own dreams and had always resented being treated like a pawn in Shahzai’s game. Quietly, she encouraged Salar to follow his heart — even if it meant defying the man who had raised them both.

Bushra, upon learning the truth about Salar’s identity and his connection to Shahzai, felt shattered. The man she had started to love wasn’t just a criminal — he was destined to marry her best friend, Fajar. Angry and heartbroken, she walked away.

Salar, for the first time, broke. He refused Shahzai’s command. He walked out of the empire he had helped build, risking his life for love. Shahzai, blinded by pride, disowned him. Fajar supported Salar silently and stood up to her father too, ending the forced engagement.

Months passed. Salar disappeared from everyone's life. Bushra thought she’d lost him forever. But one winter evening, while closing the shelter, she saw a man standing in the snow — weak, bruised, no guards, no pride — just Salar.

“I’m not the man you met,” he said. “But I want to become the man you believed I could be.”

Bushra looked into his eyes and saw no villain — just love, pain, and a man who had given up everything… for her.

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Twist Ending: Shahzai, realizing the emptiness of his empire and the loss of both his daughter and nephew, falls ill. Fajar forgives him, and in the end, he visits Salar and Bushra — not as a kingmaker, but as a broken man seeking forgiveness.

Moral: Sometimes love doesn’t just heal hearts — it redeems soul's .🌸🥹🫂🤌💯

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