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I loved the story

"Loved the way author used metaphors in this story ... the little girl , the man , the girl in the car , the girl in blue jacket and the watcher . Life , struggle , wounds and trauma the author portrayed it so beautifully . Confusing at first but slowly everything made sense ... the white teliphone , looking forward to more work from her 🤍🤍🤍"

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"Readers would feel a wide range of emotions.The core is suspenseful. It's healing an overthinking mind according to me...Waiting for more works from AB✨️"

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