Inkitt
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Unique and Fantastic

"Loved this book. The story was unique with an intriguing world. I loved the 3 main characters and the struggles they had to overcome together. Would definitely recommend."

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Absolutely loved this book

"I just couldn’t put this book down, read it all in one day. Loved all the main characters (especially their dad, he was hilarious :’-D) and loved the take on a world with magic. Gritty, dangerous and powerful and so well thought through. It all felt very real and I loved it all. "

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I could read on and on!

"Loved the magic in this book - so inventive! And the three characters were perfect- could read so much more from them!"

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So worth it!

"I’m so happy that I chose to read your book! I am thoroughly enjoying it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us."

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Great story

"I absolutely love the writing style. I just couldn't stop reading, take the chance you won't be disappointed. Wow, a great find. The author did a great job of demonstrating a vulnerability and a weakness, without making the characters weak. Excellent work truly a pleasure to read. "

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Another brilliant piece

"I'm absolutely in awe of this author. 2nd book of her's am reading and her mind is clearly unmatched in creativity. This book in another evidence?"

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Ash of the heart

"Amazing story! Highly recommend "

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Ash of the Heart

"That can't be the end 😭 Please let there be a book 2 or a continuation! The world building is so fantastic. The characters are so deep in such a short story. I need more! I love the short punctuated writing style. It would be even more world-class if it varied to a longer style at a different pov. (food for thought / please write more!) "

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