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Masterful Tension and Deep Emotions!

"Incredible world-building and even better character dynamics. The 'Rule' system adds a unique layer of suspense that keeps you on the edge of your seat. If you like dark secrets and complex relationships, this is a must-read!"

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Obsessed- Becoming Ryan💜

"Right, let me just say this is the first book I am reading of this author and I am obsess to find out more. 💜 I like need to know about what happened to Ryan and what I will say about this author she keeps you hooked with his twin sister from the start and when you think you have found who it is say there is more surprises around the corner, now I am looking forward to knowing what happens next 💜 I need to know, I started reading this book one night and I was flying through the chapters and that is a first for me but I was really taken in with this world and the book is fast really reads wells for those with dyslexia. The characters are really there how this author has done them is amazing like I'm there thinking is this author secret actor you know doing these characters this too good there has to be some acting background there either way off the charts amazing💜 Thank you for this story and I am waiting for updates I need more 💜"

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My favourite

"I just love this! Murderer mystery is one of my faves. Esch chapter gets more interesting as Aeries steps into Ryan’s life to uncover the truth. I just hope Aeries doesn’t make any mistakes and expose herself. Also I love how each of the characters emotions have been described so vividly. Infact this book is amazing. I can’t wait to read more! Great work! 🤌🏻❤️"

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"(It is just me and my obsession with reviewing book in between🤭) Your writing style is really captivating, Saher. A murder mystery is what I would always look forward to read but as I continued flipping pages, I realised it’s more than a murder mystery. The story holds a lot in it. Ryan’s story feels very real and his twin is all set to unfold the secrets (as if it won’t leave us with further questions🥲) The character development is great and story moves smoothly. There is a little problem with punctuation but it doesn’t really influence the story. Keep up the great work! "

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