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Beneath The Surface

Name: Beneath The Surface
Author: Louisgirll_28

Louisgirll_28 5 stories

Poetry Poemsforyou Poemsaboutlife

Story Notes

This poem is about the way someone feels but the things inside them the characters shown outside r different from the characters inside them

Summary

It is a poem whether a boy or a girl the feeling of quietness the feeling of misunderstanding

Genre: Poetry

Author: Louisgirll_28

Status: Complete

Chapters: 1

Rating: 5.0 (1 review)

Age Rating: 13+

Chapter 1

Looking so soft; yet so frightened.

Looking so clueless; yet so known.

Looking so innocent; yet so haunted.

Looking so beautiful; yet so hidden.

Looking so noble; yet so common.

Looking so sweet; yet so hard.

Looking so sweet; yet so mysterious.

Looking so cold; yet so friendly.

Looking so distant; yet so close.

Looking so harsh; yet so tender.

Looking so alone near; yet so safe near.

Looking so cold; yet so gentle.

Looking so detached; yet so kind.

Looking so sad;yet so pure

Looking so heartless;yet so caring.

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Author pro Daine lewis

Your story truly caught my attention.
The way you write is compelling and impactful I’d be interested in exploring more of your work. How long have you been writing? I’m asking with something in mind and would love to explain when you're ready.

a year

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