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Old-School Gum Shoe Feel

"I love this writing style! It reminds me of the movie Sunset Boulevard; there's a reason that's a classic. Like the movie, this piece pairs a simple rhythm with colorful, unexpected descriptions that set the tone and feel of the characters' world. For example, "It smelled like coffee bean and desperation." Amazing word choice! I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys great writing as much as a great story. "

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