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“Eyes in the Metro”

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Summary

> A silent obsession in the depths of the metro... When you feel eyes watching you, fear grows between the pages of routine. “I saw you yesterday. On the train.” And that was only the beginning.

Genre
Thriller
Author
Zeynep
Status
1yr ago
Chapters
17
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: Eyes in the Metro


> I got on the metro.

It wasn’t crowded, but the emptiness didn’t feel safe either.

Silence wrapped around everything. Only the metallic screech of the rails and a muffled announcement in the background could be heard.

I sat down, hesitated for a moment.

Pulled out my book from my shoulder bag.

Started flipping through the pages.

I read the same paragraph twice.

I noticed it — but didn’t care.

And then, I felt it.

Two pairs of eyes watching me.

A shiver ran down my spine.

I turned my head — but no one was there.

There were people, yes... but those eyes, that stare…

As if it had never existed.

I turned back to my book. Tried to keep reading.

But now, the words had lost their clarity.

In the silence, I could feel it:

An invisible gaze.

Watching me.

And at that moment, I saw it —

My stop was next

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