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Hooked on the story

"I was instantly hooked on the first chapter. The writing style draws you in and keeps you reading, feeling as if you're there and part of the story. I can't wait for more chapters! "

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Eagerly checking in each week

"Best story I’ve read in a long time. Checking each Friday religiously. Love you keep it up"

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Loving the anticipation

"Loving the interactions between her and Mael 😎. Wanting her to save the pirate ship and not let them get caught. "

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Full of suspense

"There are two battles. One with The Saint, one with the captain. It hasn’t happened yet, but it’s coming. I’m betting on The Saint "

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Yes for The Saint

"Ren and The Saint are more human than most humans. I love the dialogue, but the true feelings are the best"

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Wonderful writing. Pls continue. It's a shame to discontinue this piece

"Wonderful writing. Pls continue. It's a shame to discontinue this piece"

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Evolution of a Great Story

"A resolute and clever heroine developing into a woman on her own terms rather than those forced upon her by society. I am curious to see where this journey leads."

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