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Update?

"Will there be any more updates!? "

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i really love the story and the plot but i wish u upload more often

"i really like the plot and also the characters but i wish u upload more often"

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very good story

"I really liked this story. I love the character self discovery and I’m very excited to see all three of them together. pls update more often😭"

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Good story about 4 guys

"I love this story. It’s about a guy who discovered is sexually with his teemmates. He has three lovers that are very different with their kinks."

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Eli

"I have enjoyed this story so far. Looking forward to reading the rest and finding out who Eli ends up with!! Ooh so juicy"

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Great story

"Starts slow, building the characters, but the story seems to get better every new chapter. They are very well constructed and always leaves the felling that you need to see what comes next. Very good story, I’m loving it "

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Bending Eli

"I love the plot so much that I just want to know desperately what will happen to poor Eli!"

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Nice story

"Nice story"

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Bending Eli

"I’m really liking this book so far. It really makes you wonder what might happen next. Keep up the good work!"

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Bending Eli

"This is pretty good although I would like poor Eli to find Love"

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Bending Eli

" I enjoyed your story so far………now continue it. I have been reviewing for Inkitt for 15 years. And I don’t normally review a story so early in its construction. You have a good start……now finish it. I won’t review it again until it’s finished. Good luck, and finish it. Bill Lesburg "

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Bending Eli

"It's a nice nice nothing yo not like about it just hope the coach date Eli "

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Not your typical frat boys

"I was hoping for a love story... the attraction in the story is great but it keeps the reader hoping for more... still a good read. "

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