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Writings from a Deranged Mind

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Summary

Raw and unedited writings, mostly poems, that I wrote during a mental breakdown back in 2023. Some of it doesn't make sense but I still found them to be interesting.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Eyes

Black holes for eyes

eyes that pinpoint lies

they target your mind

absorbing secrets and insecurities

oh, I know a secret!

delusions

a diluted mess of sanity

what is sanity?

when you

undress, unveil, and reveal with

someone who

takes all your marbles in your

wooden heart-shaped box

and throws them to the ground

as you and I watch

each piece shatter to the floor

I tell him, "No more."

and walk him to the front door


Wormholes for eyes

tunneling, funneling, spiraling

into what felt like infinity

until we meet again

Because you are

a light I never want to see dim

and God forbid you go out


A universe in your eyes

a place I want to be

I want to see the things

that make you happy

I want to see your future

and wonder

I hope to be a true friend

because I'd rather be in your life

than not at all


Look into my eyes

what do you see?

Do you see my soul through that window of yours?

Maybe a similar universe?

I know one thing for sure

A new solar system was born

a planet with us formed

that sun, an angel

watches over us, you and me.

And I pray we cross paths again

because I want it to be a reality

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Your writing is absolutely fantastic powerful, emotional, and deeply moving. It’s the kind of work that deserves to be seen by more eyes, beyond this space. There's a massive platform one that turns stories like yours into monthly streams of passive income. if you're open to something bigger… I’d love to show you what’s possible.

a year

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