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Loved it.

"Another amazing litrpg story. I especially loved how he so believably bumbled his way through stuff. But yeah, a really relatable protagonist, and a really funny story. I hope that you write a sequel, but in the meantime I'll go check out your other works."

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Well-written, well-plotted and, well, it's funny

"I enjoyed this book, and its previous sister book, which is really Book One of the series.. A well-plotted and well-written story, which hangs together beautifully. It has a sense of reality even though it's high fantasy. It actually made me look up Buckhannon and Upshur, and yes, they are of course real - although I assume there is not an actual reality architect working there. It's very funny, and also an excellent and realistic portrait of a shut-in who has to face up to reality. I'm not sure how a third book could run, but I hope the author can find a way forward, that stays funny. A good book. Well done. As an aside - I can quibble with some of the details. Elected representatives are by definition not "bureaucrats". It's a horrible word, but it's used to describe hard-working, under-paid public servants. Their job is to implement the stupid legislation and stupid regulations created by stupid politicians and voters. But Americans have been taught to blame them for that stupidity, not the actual culprits. "

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writing skills

"I loved this chapter the characters felt so alive and the emotions came across beautifully"

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How I accidentally took over my town

"Beautifully written, funny and heart warming journey of a gamer who gets god tier 1 status in the game of life and levels up doing well by doing good. A joy to follow. Each new chapter describes a civic improvement project that as a byproduct changes him from introverted incel into someone useful and popular. "

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