This story contains themes of: depression
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I have always carried words with me. Words evoke feeling, as any form of art should. I condense those feelings into little snippets, and offer them to you. I offer a small collection of poems written by a wayward author, looking to share their experience with any who would listen. I
Hazy pastures in the misty morning grey,
With dreams like dew drops on each blade.
We graze upon the meadow on the dawning day, in plains we once forbade.
We shepard no one unto their slumber,
For we ourselves are lost.
And when us strays must go under, our souls must weigh the cost.
Good little lambs are counted against the stars, but not the ones who've gone astray.
We go where the stray sheep heal their scars, the hazy pasture in the misty morning grey.
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Fiona Walker: First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final c...
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I love this poem! I think it speaks deeply on structure, the power of wandering and the search for something greater. I feel like it's up to the reader what lies in the misty morning grey, but what matters most is the mindset to stray off and find it 🖤 Very cute, short but profound!