Deja Vu of the Third Kind:The Remembrance Coming to Life
Deja Vu of the Third Kind:The Remembrance Coming to Life

"I like stories that identify me and I do not care about the past, present or the future of it, as long as it is original. I would like to see more of your work, so I will keep my eyes open for this."

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Too Good

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Interesting

"You have an interesting plot, your descriptions are alright. Some of your paragraphs are cut off mid sentence and start a new paragraph. You seem to be telling the readers at times what the main character is doing instead of describing. Be careful with that as this can turn off your readers and make the main character appear to be having runaway thoughts. Just work on these few things but other than that things look good so far from what I've read."

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