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What is your opinion?
Jules: on the right track
"Lovely sweet and short love story"
hilarylinde55
"Good story. Found everything moving a little too fast but then who am I to say that love at first sight is not possible. Nice one.💌"
Great Job
"I loved the story, the erotic parts were very imaginable. You did an excellent job writing and creating the story."
Good story
"I really liked this story but it was super fast paced. Some plot points were brought in but then never really explored. Could be a great story if it was expanded on more "
