The Gifted Omega
Brenda’s thoughts

"So for very interesting. So many years and twist and turns. I wonder how the Author keeps everything together.Can’t wait for the rest."

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Kim

16 chapters read

Great short story

"I liked the triple hybrid angle. The pups were adorable. So many typos to read through."

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JLW

15 chapters read

Cute

"This was a cute and short story. I’m happy Annie got her ending. Thank you"

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Susan

12 chapters read

The gifted omega

"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "

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Susan

12 chapters read

The gifted omega

"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "

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Susan

12 chapters read

The gifted omega

"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "

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Susan

12 chapters read

The gifted omega

"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "

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Susan

12 chapters read

The gifted omega

"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "

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CJhemphill

15 chapters read

Good Plot, Needs Editing

"This has a good plot for a short story. However, it was difficult to read with the multiple grammar and spelling errors. There is a lot of punctuation marks missing and run on sentences. A quick edit would definitely make it more reader friendly. "

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carolin

14 chapters read

Interesting

"Short story with great potential. This story unfolds with lots of drama, but it moves so fast. It does leave the reader trying to catch up with the time skips and figuring out what happened in between. Perhaps in a sequel the story could unfold with more clarity, I love stories that have lots of content with little fluff. This story has no fluff but lots of unsaid plot. Again great beginning "

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vera

16 chapters read

Decent read

"A story with potential to be greater. Needs alot of editing and cam get it expanded to be a bit more, but a good love story combo of vamps, witch and wolf."

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