Brenda’s thoughts
"So for very interesting. So many years and twist and turns. I wonder how the Author keeps everything together.Can’t wait for the rest."
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"So for very interesting. So many years and twist and turns. I wonder how the Author keeps everything together.Can’t wait for the rest."
"I liked the triple hybrid angle. The pups were adorable. So many typos to read through."
"This was a cute and short story. I’m happy Annie got her ending. Thank you"
"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "
"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "
"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "
"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "
"There are spelling mistakes, and the punctuation is terrible, but despite that, this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. "
"This has a good plot for a short story. However, it was difficult to read with the multiple grammar and spelling errors. There is a lot of punctuation marks missing and run on sentences. A quick edit would definitely make it more reader friendly. "
"Short story with great potential. This story unfolds with lots of drama, but it moves so fast. It does leave the reader trying to catch up with the time skips and figuring out what happened in between. Perhaps in a sequel the story could unfold with more clarity, I love stories that have lots of content with little fluff. This story has no fluff but lots of unsaid plot. Again great beginning "
"A story with potential to be greater. Needs alot of editing and cam get it expanded to be a bit more, but a good love story combo of vamps, witch and wolf."