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A dark shadow

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Summary

This is a story where a girl lived alone on flat that is near to her university. She lived alone in his house because she has no mother and father ..

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1


🖤 A Dark Shadow


Chapter 1: Arrival


The rain fell steadily, like the sky had been mourning long before she arrived.


Aaliya stepped out of the rickshaw with a small suitcase and tired eyes. Her mother’s death still clung to her skin like fog, and her father — emotionally distant — had paid the rent for this apartment as if it were a transaction, not a beginning.


The building stood like a forgotten relic from another era. Paint peeled from the walls like shedding skin. A flickering yellow bulb blinked above the main entrance, casting long crooked shadows across the corridor.


Apartment 204.

Second floor. End of the hall.


She walked past the other doors, noting how eerily quiet the building was. No kids playing. No kitchen smells. No music. Just silence — heavy and unnatural.


As she reached her door, she hesitated. Her key felt cold, heavier than it should’ve. She forced a chuckle. “Stop being weird, Aaliya,” she whispered, unlocking it.


The moment the door opened, the air shifted.


It wasn’t just cold — it felt stale, heavy, like something had been trapped inside for too long. The kind of silence that hums in your bones.


She stepped in.


The floorboards groaned beneath her, and the light switch clicked — but the bulb took a full two seconds before flickering to life.


The apartment was bare. A single bed frame, a cracked mirror on the wall, and a rusting fan that creaked lazily even when turned off.


But what struck her most… was the shadows.


They were too dark.


Even under the bulb’s dull light, the corners of the room looked like they were absorbing the light rather than reflecting it. It made her uncomfortable — like someone was watching.


She looked over her shoulder. Nothing.


“Get a grip,” she muttered and started unpacking.


But as she opened her suitcase, the mirror behind her caught her eye.


For just a second — a split second — she thought she saw someone standing behind her.


But when she turned, there was no one.


Just her reflection, breathing heavily


The next morning brought no relief.


Aaliya woke to a silent apartment, sunlight barely managing to pierce through the thick, stained curtains. She pushed them aside and blinked at the dull view outside — broken balconies, wires hanging like vines, and a crow perched on the opposite building's ledge… just staring.


The apartment felt even colder than yesterday. She rubbed her arms and moved toward the kitchen, which was little more than a narrow strip of cracked tiles, a rusty sink, and two dusty cabinets. Everything about this place felt wrong, but she told herself it was just the change.


"New city. New start. That’s all this is," she whispered, boiling water for tea.


But as she poured it into the cup, she heard it.


A click.


It came from the living room.


She turned — heart suddenly racing — and saw the ceiling fan slowly spinning, even though the switch was off. Not fast… just one slow creak… two… then it stopped.


Her breath caught. She reached for the wall switch and flipped it off and on again. Nothing changed.


Was it faulty wiring?


That night, things grew stranger.



---


At 11:42 p.m., Aaliya lay in bed scrolling through old photos on her phone. Her mother’s picture popped up — smiling, eyes filled with kindness. She stared at it for a long time, until the room suddenly… dimmed.


Not like the bulb flickered. No — it was like the shadows deepened, all at once.


She looked around.


Every corner of the room seemed to stretch. The walls looked further away than they had seconds ago. The mirror on the wall… darker than it should be.


She got up and went to the bathroom, splashing cold water on her face.


But when she looked up at the mirror, she noticed something.

A figure — a faint silhouette — standing in the reflection behind her… motionless.


She spun around.


Nothing.


She turned back to the mirror.


Still there.


The figure wasn’t fully formed — more like a smudge in the shape of a person. A dark void, tall and slightly hunched. It didn’t move. Didn’t breathe.


Just watched.


She backed away from the sink, her heartbeat thudding in her ears. She grabbed her phone, turned on the flashlight — and looked again.


Gone.


No smudge. No shadow. Just her face… pale and confused.



---


The next morning, she found a thin black line scratched across her left arm. It stung when touched,like a fresh burn.

She stared at it after long time.

No blood no bruising

Just a mark like a reminder.

-

Three days passed.


Each night, Aaliya woke with a start — her sheets tangled, breath heavy, and a sharp stinging sensation somewhere on her arms or legs. The black lines kept appearing. At first, they were thin. But now, they curved… like shapes. Symbols. She even took pictures of them, hoping she was imagining it.


But they were real.


And they were growing darker.


She had started leaving the lights on while she slept, but even that didn’t help. Because the shadows… weren’t gone. They lingered under the bed, behind the curtains, in the corners of the mirror — too dark, too solid. And worst of all, they seemed to move.


Not flicker.


Shift.


Almost like they were breathing.

---

That morning, fed up and desperate for distraction, Aaliya decided to clean the dusty storage cabinet near the bathroom door. It had remained untouched since her arrival. The wood was warped, its handles rusted, and when she pulled it open, a wave of mildew and decay hit her face.


Inside, a mess of torn plastic bags, broken hangers, and a cracked umbrella. She reached further, coughing from the dust, until her fingers brushed something smooth and cold.


A metal vent.


Half-covered behind the wall panel. Its screws were loose — as if someone had opened it before.


Aaliya’s brows furrowed. Curiosity overpowered hesitation.


She fetched a screwdriver and slowly twisted the screws out one by one. The vent popped open with a soft thunk, and behind it was a shallow cavity. Inside, wrapped in a thin layer of plastic, was a black leather notebook — worn, soft at the edges, and damp from years of neglect.


She pulled it out.


It smelled of rot and something… older.


There was no lock, no name on the cover. Just pages — yellowed, wrinkled, and stained with what looked suspiciously like water… or tears.


She opened it.


The first page was scrawled in frantic, sharp handwriting:


> “My name is Meher Aftab. I don’t know how much longer I can stay here. The dark thing in this apartment isn’t human. It knows me. It whispers things I never told anyone. It follows me. It waits.”




Aaliya’s heart began to pound.


She flipped to the next page.


> “It started with dreams. Just like everyone else. A lake. A scream. Then… scratches. On my arms. My neck. Then it began standing at the foot of my bed.”




> “People think I’m sick. That I’m paranoid. But I’m not. This place is cursed. Or haunted. Or maybe it’s worse. Maybe this place feeds on guilt.”




> “If you’re reading this… please leave. Before it finds out what you’re hiding.”




Aaliya's hands trembled.


She turned another page. The handwriting got worse — like the writer was shaking. The words were barely readable:


> “It says my name now. It knows what I did. I didn’t mean to. It was an accident. I was just a child.”




> “She was just a child.”




The ink smudged near the bottom, and a single sentence repeated over and over in large, slanted letters:


> “I see it in the mirror.”

“I see it in the mirror.”

“I see it in the mirror.”




Aaliya slammed the notebook shut and dropped it to the floor.


Her entire body felt frozen.



---


That night, she didn’t sleep.


She sat in bed with her back against the wall, the journal resting on the floor nearby. The shadows were quieter tonight… or maybe they were simply watching her differently now.


More closely.


Like they recognized her.


Like the journal had told them something about her.


And maybe… it had.



---


As the hours passed and night deepened, Aaliya’s eyes grew heavy. The fan above her head creaked slowly. The bulb flickered once, then twice, before steadying.


Then she heard it.


A soft whisper, not outside, not in the hallway, but right behind her ear.


> “You knew too… didn’t you?”




She gasped and turned sharply — but no one was there.


Only her own reflection in the mirror across the room…

smiling.


But she wasn’t.



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