Where the Heart Stops Beating

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Summary

After a devastating breakup, Amaya escapes to a quiet coastal town, hoping to mend her heart and start over. But her peace shatters when she meets Elijah; a reclusive, alluring stranger who only emerges after sunset… and hasn’t aged a day in decades. Locals speak in hushed tones about Room 17, the inn where Elijah resides. They say he’s cursed. They say he falls in love once every generation. And every time she dies. Amaya tries to ignore the warnings… until the lines between passion and possession blur. Now, she must face an impossible truth: The man she’s falling for may not be human And loving him might be the last thing she ever does.

Genre
Drama
Author
Huey
Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Town That Forgot the Time

They said Astoria was quiet. A place to start over.

Perched on the edge of the Pacific, cradled by fog and old hills, the coastal town looked like something trapped between centuries. Old cannery buildings lined the Columbia River. Weather-worn Victorian homes climbed steep, narrow streets. And the wind is constant, whispering, watchful — never seemed to sleep.

Amaya arrived on a Sunday. Grey skies. Empty sidewalks. Seagulls wheeling above the Astoria-Megler Bridge like they were circling something long dead.

She stepped off the Greyhound bus with one suitcase and a broken heart, the kind of broken that doesn’t cry anymore, just… goes quiet.

Six months ago, she was engaged. Two months ago, she discovered her fiancé had a second life in Chicago. One week ago, she tossed the ring into the Willamette River and left Portland with no forwarding address.

Now here she was: Astoria, Oregon.

Population: just under 10,000.

Mood: like the town had secrets it had made peace with.

Even the air felt old.

She checked into the Meridian House, a once-grand Victorian that now served as a sleepy inn for writers, loners, and people trying to be forgotten. Its green-painted gables slanted just slightly toward the sea, and the windows looked out over the mist like the house was watching for someone who never came back.

“You’ll be in Room 6,” said the innkeeper, a stiffly polite older woman named Miss Lila. “Top floor. Ocean view.”

Amaya took the brass key and offered a small smile.

Lila hesitated. “Try to avoid the third-floor west hallway, please. We’ve closed it off for… repairs.”

But on the way to her room, Amaya noticed something strange. The hallway doors went from Room 6… to Room 8.

No Room 7.

And a wooden sign at the end of the hallway read: “Third Wing Closed. Staff Only.”

The paint was chipped. The doorknob beneath it was polished from use.

That night, the wind howled through the bay with a kind of voice, not a scream, but something older. A memory pretending to be a storm.

The sky was clear. No rain. Just fog. Low and curling like it was alive.

Wrapped in a sweater, Amaya stood at her window watching the river bend through the town. Barges moved slowly in the dark. The foghorn moaned in the distance, long and aching, like something grieving at sea.

She thought she could get used to this place.

Until the knock.

It came at exactly midnight.

One soft knock on her door.

She froze, the mug in her hand trembling slightly.

Maybe it was Lila. Maybe she’d forgotten something.

“Hello?” she called gently, opening the door just an inch.

But the hallway was empty.

The carpets stretched on quietly beneath dim antique sconces. The silence was thick. Heavy.

Then, just at the end of the hall near the “staff only” door, a shadow moved.

Tall. Broad-shouldered. Dressed in black. His gait was graceful… but too smooth. Like he wasn’t touching the floor.

Amaya slammed her door shut and threw the bolt.

The next morning, over burnt coffee in the inn’s downstairs parlor, she asked Miss Lila if anyone else was staying in the house.

“No,” Lila said, slicing a pear. “Just you, dear.”

“But I thought I saw someone…”

Lila paused, too long, and placed the knife down.

“This house is very old,” she said carefully. “Sometimes it remembers things people forget.”

Amaya stared at her. “That’s not an answer.”

“It’s the only one you’ll get,” Lila replied, and offered her a slice of pear.

Later that day, Amaya explored downtown Astoria. The streets sloped steeply, like the town was always trying to crawl uphill. She wandered into a bookstore on Commercial Street, the kind with dusty wood floors and handwritten labels.

No one else was inside.

When she turned to leave, she saw him again, the same man.

Standing across the street, beside the old Liberty Theater. Black coat. Still. Watching her.

He didn’t blink.

Didn’t move.

Didn’t smile.

Then, as a truck passed between them, he vanished.

Amaya’s heart was beating too fast. Too loud. She touched her wrist. Tried to count the pulse.

Something about this town was off. Not just old, haunted. Not by ghosts. By memory.

That night, the knock returned.

Midnight.

Soft.

Single.

This time, Amaya didn’t move. She sat up in bed, clutching the blanket, the sound of her own heartbeat louder than the wind outside.

Then a whisper came through the door.

A voice like a breath against the keyhole.

“I remember you.”