I'M FINE – A LIE IN EVERY LINE
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I'M FINE – A LIE IN EVERY LINE

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Story Notes

"Are you okay ?"

"Yes" she replied with a smile like there is no pains and problems in her life

She is a laugher queen around the people and cries in alone

Summary

She's the laughter queen around everyone, lighting up rooms with her smile but in her own room, she's just... silent. She hides every pain, shares every joy, but deep down? Even happy moments feel hollow. Because the person she once shared every little joy with... is gone. She's happy or at least, she pretends to be. This book is her truth: A collection of unspoken feelings, hidden wounds, and the kind of silence that screams the loudest.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Before the silence

CHAPTER 1

She is in a crowd where people are enjoying with their loved ones they look happy and blissful.

Suddenly she noticed a girl sitting at the corner of the ending lane.

The girl looks sad and empty...

But she forces a smile when someone hands her a couple of clothes.



"It's necessary to show a smile to people

If u don't then they'll call you dull , quite and lifeless.

They'll think you are ston hearted just because they couldn't fake the moment."



"Everything around her smelled like lavender

Sweet , soft , alive.

Her skin glowed like honey under the morning light ,

And roces dance in her hair.

She was joy, wrapped in softness

But no one saw the tired sparkling hiding her silence storms"



"She was Enjoying every moment

gossiping , cracking jokes and laughing like a laugher queen

But behind that laugh lived her sadness and silent darkness.

She hides every unspoken truth within her gossips and giggles

The thing she wants to say , but just can't."



Smiling is something you show the world

Like you are doing fine in life.

But deep down you are not.

It's just a secret you keep hidden inside,

Something they'll never see unless you let them.


"If you ever smiled through your pain , this chapter is for you"

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Chapter Notes

Hey reader's this is my first poetry book hope you like the chapter ✨

Going to be more intresting in further chapters... 🤗

Author pro Daine lewis
Author pro Daine lewis

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