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Write more ❤️❤️❤️ I love the pacing
"I love the pacing, its top notch I recommend to everyone you will love it"
Good descriptions
"I'm not a fan of multiple POV swapping during chapters, however after the first two chapters, this improves greatly. The grammar is excellent and the use of descriptive language is amazing. The story is fast-paced (exactly what is needed for a plot like this) and the writing style improved as the story progressed. I think the first chapter has a bit of switching narrative? It seems to jump between first person and third person, but this stops after the first chapter. Hope you keep writing! :)"
