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Great story!!

"I love this story so much!! A very enjoyable read! "

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Jill

"I love this book, characters and plot, hopefully you will update quickly,cause there is nothing worse than waiting for ages for updates 😀 "

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I love this

"Great story! Absolutely love it. Keep up the good work. "

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Romantic Farce done right

"Amusing and heartwarming. This story had me giggling. I fell in love with the female lead and hoped the best for her. It’s a rip roaring farce that I never wanted to end. Anyone who likes romantic comedies should enjoy this story. The pacing is good, the story is solid. The voice is not really American which I’ve learned to overlook. This could be turned into a book with some solid editing and become a best seller. Very enjoyable feel good read. "

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I'm so glued to this, definitely hooking my girl up in this. Like how clair using her brain

"Clair girl I like the change, acting like the boss lady you're about to be😌😌"

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Keeping my mafia husband

"Little confused why he's ignoring and not his ex. I can't wait to read more chapters still giving thumbs up. "

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His love

"One of the best"

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Review o'clock

"For a nice book, what the writer chose to do is very dishonest 😒🙄. Whatever your reason may be when you decided to carry out such decision you should have changed the book to a PAID book instead of putting up a front like it's FREE when it's not. This is very misleading and not nice at all!!!. So much for the impression you've given ☹️."

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Do not read. No chapter 23 onward

"I agree with the other comment. Either share that majority of chapters are no longer up due to another VIP link or put the full book up. Or subscribe to the subscription service here so we know... Don’t bother reading as the full book is not up. Missing chapters due to a note in the book saying you need to go to another site to be a ‘VIP’ are from chapter 23 onwards. Chapter 25 is there but after it goes back to the above comment. "

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Note

"Either write the book properly or put a note at the front about this “vip” thing"

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