Inkitt
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Great read

"Enemies to lovers done right. Witty, emotional, and impossible to stop reading."

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Perfect

"I held on to every word.. I understand what the other reviews mean about it being long, and the back and forth.. but I loved it. I can’t wait to start part 2. Great job!!!! "

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Fake o till We Fall

"This is crazy , I can’t believe this is the end. So disappointed!!"

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Fake it. Till we fall

"It‘s a good one, just read it☺️"

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Nat

"What the hell! After all of that! And I mean, all of that you ended it like that?!?! I don't think I can do it again! I loved it until the last 4 chapters. I felt like a lot happened way too quickly and then the ending?!?!"

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This

"Book is all over the place, it feels like several novels stitched into one. Incorrect names, missing pages of incidents that didn't happen but are discussed heavily, things being said that made no sense, etc. It has great potential but..."

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Overdone

"I really don't mind the love>betrayal>enemies>redemption idea, but this took it way too far. He kept betraying, and she kept forgiving, so it felt unnecessarily drawn out - and then it ends with a 'cliffhanger' betrayal to lead into a second book?! I am not often angry, but that really set me off. Put the stick down and quit beating a dead horse! In all honesty, I was 200% against her ever giving him another chance when I realized he kept turning the lamp off to exert power over her despite knowing she was terrified of the dark. That's just plain abusive."

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