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Good story want to move on to next chapter to find out what's happening

"Nothing to dislike just keeps you interested and can't put it down "

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The devil's deal

"I would recommend the book to Young adults who likes spicy "

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Love between the two eyes šŸ˜ŠšŸ’“

"I love everything about them. CAN'T 2AIT FOR THE NEXT!!!! this actually my first story reading here on inkitt and the first story which made get emotionally attached. ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø"

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Awesome

"I'm enjoying this story so much. The characters and tension between them is exciting. Edge of my seat waiting to find out more of July's past."

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Love this book

"The book is great, I love reading it! I wish the updates came faster šŸ˜‚"

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Fun read

"She can't trust anyone. They are criminals and would kill her as soon as fuck her. Poor girl."

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Amazing

"I am hooked. The story has been amazing so far. The characters, the plot, and the twists. Can't wait for the next chapter."

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Axel's twist of faith not fate

"If July is the mafia niece or daughter. Im dead šŸ’€ hence why shes a natural killer 🪃"

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So engaging, interesting.

"I'm really interested in this story and want to know what happen when the bloodfangs boys return and see what July see in the room. Can't wait to see the coming chapter's "

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The devil's deal

"I absolutely love the plot, though I was a bit surprised when I realised it was a dark romance, guess i should've read the disclaimer thingy properly. Amazing plot, and you're writing style is that professional comforting way. One thing i don't really understand is why you didn't use speech marks " ", or these ' '. It would make reading and understanding easier i think. I love July's character, and i'm like on chapter 31 or smth, and you have a great show don't tell. Like I . Also amazing tension between July and Kai, I especially love the fact that he cares about her and yet he also messes with her the most in the most hilariously dangerous way. Also how did you write 81 chapters?!!! Great work! "

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Dark romance

"Suspenseful, plot twisting, spicy, funny. I love it"

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The book

"Omg!! I’m loving this book so far! It’s for sure a ten oh of ten for me so far. Probably by far the best book I’ve read recently. I love the way on how you easily can paint a picture in your head just reading your words. I honestly can’t wait to read more!! I gotta say it’s keeping me curious, and I love that I can feel the characters emotions. It’s exciting, dangerous, mysterious, the heat and secrets between the characters. I’m loving it all. I literally devoured this book so fast which sometimes isn’t really normal for me, but it was just pulling me in, and I couldn’t resist reading further. Hahaha last night I ended up staying up the whole night just reading. And I kept reading. I honestly did love every bit of it!! I can’t wait to read more and find out what happens next! Keep up the great work! šŸ’•"

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More please!

"If you are tired of the same bully romance story over and over again then I highly recommend this book! The writing is fantastic and the plot is blowing. My. Mind. I love July’s character progression and that she’s becoming a self sufficient BOSS. Although I do hope her and Kai make it in the end, I love that the story is on her terms now!! I check back every day for a new chapter and can’t wait to see where this story goes :)"

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The Devil's Deal

"It was amazing, once I started reading it, boom I couldn't stop until my mom screamed at me. I rlly love the energy the vibe the intensity and the mystery. It meets my expectations of 100\100 but u could put it like who said this and who said that. So it would be clearer then reader won't have to think to much Over all I think it was EXCELLENT"

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Please separate the speeches with bold ink or exclamation marks

"A nice one please separate the speeches with exclamation mark"

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Dying to read the rest

"I wish I’d waited until the book was complete before I started reading this because I could not put it down. I read 500 pages in the space of 6 hours. I read until 3am and my eyes were falling out of my head. I’m dying to know what happens with Kai and July. Such a good story, drawn out love interest, action, drama. I’m so sad that now I have to wait for the rest of the book to be written!!"

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The Devil’s Deal

"I love the story and the characters. The author has written a great story and I can’t wait to get updates on new chapters. You can’t leave us hanging like that. I’m ready for some steamy love scenes between Kai and July."

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What happens when she sees something she shouldn’t have.

"What happens when an ordinary college student is out one night and sees something she was never meant to? Something that drags her into a world of gangs, crime bosses and dirty deeds? Intrigue, passion, and family come together to make great reading. Love this book so far and can’t wait to see more!"

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Devil princess

"Well well this is the best book i ever read the main leads are perfect "

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Amazing plot 🤩🤩🤩

"I really like your style of writing and how you explain every character is very clear. The story is suspenseful. How she was afraid in start of story but got comfortable with gang members later was amazing. Her dialogues with Kai was intense. I am loving itā¤ā¤ā¤ā¤šŸ„°šŸ„°"

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